Comments on: My knocked out Love. http://www.thareja.com/2007/02/28/my-knocked-out-love/ The Virtual Home of Prof (Dr.) P. Thareja Wed, 10 Jun 2026 14:34:30 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.3 By: Devi Mohan http://www.thareja.com/2007/02/28/my-knocked-out-love/#comment-961 Devi Mohan Wed, 28 Feb 2007 06:03:51 +0000 http://www.thareja.com/2007/02/28/my-knocked-out-love/#comment-961 I came across the poems you had written on your site, and I must say am truly impressed! You have used different vocabulary patterns, rhythm structures and concepts for each of the different poems that I just wanted to let you know my appreciation. Anyway just a small suggestion on your valentines day poem on http://www.geocities.com/pthareja/Valentine.htm. I felt the 2nd line, 4th para should end with 'effect' rather than 'effects' which will make it perfect. Thanks! Devi I came across the poems you had written on your site, and I must say am truly impressed! You have used different vocabulary patterns, rhythm structures and concepts for each of the different poems that I just wanted to let you know my appreciation.

Anyway just a small suggestion on your valentines day poem on http://www.geocities.com/pthareja/Valentine.htm. I felt the 2nd line, 4th para should end with ‘effect’ rather than ‘effects’ which will make it perfect.

Thanks!
Devi

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